Sunday, September 18, 2011

Please correct this essay, title is "On-line Child Health Information System"?

The issues on the emotional, physical,and behavioral aspects of the child are very important such as obesity, smoking, car safety seats, infections, depression and teen suicide, vaccine, sports, illness, nutrition advice, injury prevention. It is important that child and parents can get information to help them to handle these issues. This research develops an on-line child health information web, providing proper information of child health for child and parents in order to help the child to get rid of the health problem.


Three steps are used for developing child health information system (1) assessment of the needs of the child and parent , (2) development of the web-based learning platform by system analysis, system design and information management in SQL sever database, (3) online questionnaires are used to get the information of the needs of the user.


We have established a web-based system providing integrated accurate and reliable multimedia health information in child health.|||It sounds very good except that I think more information is needed to demonstrate that the information being provided by this 'online and reliable' multimedia health info website is INDEED reliable.


1. Who provides this website's content?


2. Are they licensed physicians in just ONE or in ALL different areas of medicine?


3. Is the website sensitive to cultural differences, since the worldwide web is INDEED, worldwide?


Don't use 'reliable' unless you can answer these questions.

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